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Harmony Shell - Merfairy of Sound

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Harmony Shell - Merfairy of Sound

Post by musasgal on Tue Dec 13, 2016 3:04 pm

Name: Harmony Shell
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Planet of origin: Melodian
Magic Person type: Merfairy
Morality and personal alignment leanings: neutral
Appearance:
Mermaid:
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Transformation:


Power type: Sound

Spells:
Sonic Beat: Harmony begins to sing a beat of what’s around her (i.e wind) then swirls it to and orb. Then when the orb is used, supersonic circles are blasted at the threat, giving a good blast which results in damage....and a bruise of two. (low)

Muse’s words: Different colour fabric like threads appears out of nowhere, which the score turns into a custom made cyclone and is forced upon the target, which traps it in place. 10 second snare and a good amount of damage, plus they aren't able to fight back (medium).

Heart's tune: Harmony suppresses a target for 20 seconds inhibiting movement and spell casting while gazing into the target's heart to hear the target's personal song (the rhythm of the person’s heart). Then this song is lashed back as a mental assault on the target dealing massive physical damage. This channel has to happen uninterrupted. (high).

Seahorse reflection: A seahorse like sheild appears in front of Harmony and bats away 1 low or medium spell with its tail. After this, the sheild can absorb two attacks or fades after a minute. (Medium)

Peaceful Melody: A peaceful hum slowly arises, healing the targets wounds slowly for 30 seconds. Does not heal major wounds or broken bones. (low)

Strengths: Her creative arts (music, visual arts), having a keen eye on details and covering for others i.e letting them copy her homework so they won’t fail.

Weaknesses: Cooking, Sedatephobia (fear of silence), not handling the unexpected

Personality: Harmony is a very quirky and carefree mer-creature, but can also be able to be serious when need be. She’s also caring and is there for anyone. Harmony can be loud sometimes which can get her into trouble. During team assignments, she is determined to do her best, and won’t let anyone be left behind, even if she has to stay behind herself so a person doesn’t feel alone. She has a semi-organized mind, which is shown throughout her art (bit of planning before going completely abstract) but when it comes to her school work, she is more of a scatterbrain and usually misplace some of her textbooks.  Harmony has a love for shiny objects and obsesses over them. Harmony is outspoken and not afraid to tell it like it is. Also, she is cautious to who she trusts.

History: Harmony was born in the waters of Melody to a normal family. Her mother was a hairdresser while her father was a stay at home house husband. She never had any sort of siblings since she’s the only child in the family. She always got spoiled, though she wasn't the one for gifts. As she was growing up, she discovered she had a passion for both singing and fashion, though she treated her voice as a hobby. At a young age, maybe around 8-9 years old, she started to create her own clothes. Her parents noticed and decided to send her to a specialist boarding school for gifted Merpeople so she can pursue her passions. During the holidays, Harmony tries her best to help out around the house. Sadly, she has tried to burn the house down on numerous occasions by cooking on heated vents.  One day, when Harmony was 12, she was looking at a book in the school library, for a project about past magic users in the water kingdom, which she discover that powers are super rare and must connect to the world above. Excitedly, she had the book issued, and headed to her dorm room. She got so into it that she wasn't paying attention to her surroundings. With one magical surge, Harmony destroyed her room, causing one of the teachers dashing in. Surprised on what happened, she explained that the same event happened to her father, and apparently her magic came from her father’s side. She urged her to have that power controlled at once, and the next day, she was put in a "special" class for magic users, which made the mergirl more at ease. One school trip, that class took a field trip to the surface. It was Harmony's first time so she was kind of scared. Some of her new friends in that class told her that after the first trip, it will be a lot easier, so it was natural to feel scared. Harmony was surprised that when the class landed on the beach, her tail after it was dried off, turned into a pair of legs. Also on that day, she found out that she was a bit of a klutz and a bit careless. There she got taught though having magic is rare, but it's more rare to see a merfairy or a merwitch emerge from the experience.

A few weeks Harmony’s 14th birthday, her parents sent her am urgent note and a special heart shaped pendant. The note said that her grandma passed away suddenly, and wanted to give this pendant as a keepsake with the words, "There is a mystery that needs solving, so keep this close." Harmony broke down since this is not what she wanted to hear before her birthday celebration, and got permission to go back home to bid a final farewell. Her grandmother was the most respected elder, and loved her granddaughter to bits. She took care of her when she was alone, and often talked to her, so the bond was so strong between those two. However, when the farewell happened, Harmony noticed a white headed woman who sat next to her. Her eyes was soft and gentle. She said that she and her grandmother and herself were really close friends, and like her that she had a strong bond with her. Harmony felt a bit better, but unaware of their paths crossed again.

Now the the present day. During her one of her lessons, Harmony's school got attacked by a trio of power hungry witches. A warning signal was heard and her teacher told her class to flee. Harmony nodded and fled the school and headed to the surface. However, the trio noticed her pendant around her neck. The brunete darted after her, and before the poor mergirl was able to flee succesfully, was grabbed by the tail before being taken away with the limited spells that the school had from the other two members. And thus her story begins.

Modedit: Fixed a grammatical error. (Hyfnae)


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Re: Harmony Shell - Merfairy of Sound

Post by musasgal on Sun Mar 05, 2017 11:54 pm

Ready to be reviewed
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Re: Harmony Shell - Merfairy of Sound

Post by zerowing21 on Mon Mar 06, 2017 12:13 pm

You should probably add in that the shadows were going to attack the schools in the area at the end of the history for clarification sake.
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Re: Harmony Shell - Merfairy of Sound

Post by trusttecna on Mon Mar 06, 2017 1:46 pm

One quick edit - Why would she be able to have a kelp wrap spell when her powers are of sound?
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Re: Harmony Shell - Merfairy of Sound

Post by musasgal on Thu Mar 09, 2017 1:54 pm

It's part of her magic and where she comes from as a mermaid
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Post by trusttecna on Thu Mar 09, 2017 4:59 pm

But sound and plants/nature (kelp) are two different elements, and I haven't seen any mermaid-specific powers in the series.
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Re: Harmony Shell - Merfairy of Sound

Post by Hyfnae on Fri Mar 10, 2017 10:44 am

I concur with Trusttecna on the kelp thematical error, since indeed it would fit better in a nature or nature/water hybrid set. The tuning of the spell however is good. You could state that you produce soothing music over the duration of the spell with the exact same effect and outcome and it will be just fine.

Sonic beat: I'm not sure what you mean with the " Then when the orb is used, supersonic circles is blasted at the threat, giving a good amount of damage." part.
1) Multiple circles being blasted towards s single target? (How many projectiles/can they be distributed among multiple targets?
2) Since this is a pure damage spell without any other effects the 'good damage' portion is only valid if it's compared to the damage other low level spells do. Please clarify this in the modifier describing the amount of damage.

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Re: Harmony Shell - Merfairy of Sound

Post by trusttecna on Mon Mar 27, 2017 1:28 pm

(2 edits revoked)


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Re: Harmony Shell - Merfairy of Sound

Post by zerowing21 on Mon Mar 27, 2017 1:57 pm

While, I know she doesn't have it yet, I would like it if you did include her magic winx form in the profile so you do not have to do so later.
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Re: Harmony Shell - Merfairy of Sound

Post by trusttecna on Tue Mar 28, 2017 12:29 pm

musasgal wrote:She’s also caring and is there for anyone.

Are you sure you mean "anyone?" Even the Trix? Even someone who is trying to destroy It might be better if you changed this one to "She's also caring and is there for almost anyone," or maybe, "She's also caring and is there for those who are rather good."

musasgal wrote:Harmony was born in the waters of Melody to a normal family.
Perhaps middle-class might be a better word since mermaids aren't exactly normal.

musasgal wrote:Sadly, she has tried to burn the house down on numerous occasions by cooking.

How would burning down the house be possible in water?

musasgal wrote: Harmony was surprised that when the class landed on the beach, her tail after it was dried off, turned into a pair of legs.

So, is this for all kinds of mermaids or just her? if so, how is she able?
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Post by musasgal on Tue Mar 28, 2017 4:36 pm

Are you sure you mean "anyone?" Even the Trix? Even someone who is trying to destroy It might be better if you changed this one to "She's also caring and is there for almost anyone," or maybe, "She's also caring and is there for those who are rather good."
The main reason i worded that way is because i had no other better way to explain it at the time. The better way to word it is she there for anyone she cares about.

[quote]Perhaps middle-class might be a better word since mermaids aren't exactly normal. [quote]
You might be surprised about this, but middle-class mermaids are usually normal mermaids.

How would burning down the house be possible in water?
Specialized vents which can do serious damage if gotten out of hand.

So, is this for all kinds of mermaids or just her? if so, how is she able?
In the orginal version of her, her pendant gave her the power turning human, but in the comics (and I am allowed to do so since I already talked to Zero about this), that all mermaids (magic or no) can turn into human, so it's all kinds of mermaids. I assume that not all mermaids wants to go up to the surface.

I do all of these changes soon
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Post by trusttecna on Tue Mar 28, 2017 4:46 pm

musasgal wrote:You might be surprised about this, but middle-class mermaids are usually normal mermaids.

I could perhaps see what you're saying, but they really aren't normal. Her dad has the rarity of having powers, as does Harmony.

musasgal wrote:Specialized vents which can do serious damage if gotten out of hand.

I still don't understand. It's water.

musasgal wrote: In the orginal version of her, her pendant gave her the power turning human, but in the comics (and I am allowed to do so since I already talked to Zero about this), that all mermaids (magic or no) can turn into human, so it's all kinds of mermaids. I assume that not all mermaids wants to go up to the surface.

Alrighty! That's cool with me.

musasgal wrote:I do all of these changes soon

Take your time. c: I have Nokomis and maybe Photonis's planet so there's no rush.

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Re: Harmony Shell - Merfairy of Sound

Post by musasgal on Thu May 11, 2017 10:32 pm

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Re: Harmony Shell - Merfairy of Sound

Post by zerowing21 on Thu May 11, 2017 10:46 pm

Aside the small change I wanted invovling the trix to lead to better context to their actions and probably the idea to mention the heat vents for the cooking that almost destroyed her home, Harmony looks to be in the clear.
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Re: Harmony Shell - Merfairy of Sound

Post by zerowing21 on Sat May 27, 2017 9:01 am

Well you've gotten everything so, *stamps approved on forehead*
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Re: Harmony Shell - Merfairy of Sound

Post by Hyfnae on Mon May 29, 2017 3:49 pm

Muse's words: 20 seconds and no damage if target can still fight, 10 seconds if the target is completely unable to fight (comparable to stun effect in combat impact)

To help you determine what the value should be for the spell you have in mind.
http://winxclubrpingforum.forumotion.com/t153-status-effects

Other than this spell, all other spells are okay and if you make this fix harmony will be combat approved.

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Re: Harmony Shell - Merfairy of Sound

Post by musasgal on Wed May 31, 2017 6:12 am

spell is fixed (I hope)
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Post by Hyfnae on Fri Jun 02, 2017 3:25 am

You have to determine which of those two options you want for your spell. If you use it in a combat it has to be clear for the narrator which effect the spell has. So either it's 10 seconds snare with damage and the target can't fight back, or 20 seconds with damage if the target can still fight just not move. During a fight the narrator shouldn't have to ask you which of these two options you intend for the outcome of your spell.

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Post by musasgal on Fri Jun 02, 2017 6:42 am

And done <3
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Post by Hyfnae on Fri Jun 02, 2017 7:29 am

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Re: Harmony Shell - Merfairy of Sound

Post by trusttecna on Mon Jun 05, 2017 11:08 am

musasgal wrote: Cooking, Sedatephobia (fear of silence), not handling the unexpected

Can you give a short explanation of how the fear is sparked in daily life? (In the App next to each strength)

musasgal wrote:Her creative arts (music, visual arts), having a keen eye on details and covering for others i.e letting them copy her homework so they won’t fail.

Please give a short explanation of how creative arts is a strength and how it helps her in daily life in the app. Please also explain why covering for others is a strength and how it helps her. Please also include in there an explaination how a keen eye helps her.

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Re: Harmony Shell - Merfairy of Sound

Post by musasgal on Mon Jun 05, 2017 8:20 pm

trusttecna wrote:
musasgal wrote: Cooking, Sedatephobia (fear of silence), not handling the unexpected

Can you give a short explanation of how the fear is sparked in daily life? (In the App next to each strength)

musasgal wrote:Her creative arts (music, visual arts), having a keen eye on details and covering for others i.e letting them copy her homework so they won’t fail.

Please give a short explanation of how creative arts is a strength and how it helps her in daily life in the app. Please also explain why covering for others is a strength and how it helps her. Please also include in there an explaination how a keen eye helps her.


Sweety, if you are just confused, just pm me. I be happy to discuss with you on there. Some details should be left up for interpretation.
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