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Tsol Ekal (Almost Approved Fully)

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Re: Tsol Ekal (Almost Approved Fully)

Post by zerowing21 on Sun Apr 16, 2017 4:02 pm

Now here is a question, what if she's fighting on a beach, how will she react.

I honestly think, what you had before with what was suggested to fix it is better than the fear of beaches. You can keep the fear of beaches as an aspect of her personality, but as a weakness it's not very solid.
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Re: Tsol Ekal (Almost Approved Fully)

Post by trusttecna on Sun Apr 16, 2017 11:09 pm

Hmmm, I think I might have an idea to fuse Nikkie's idea with mine to make it stronger.

I could make her sense of judgement impaired when she gets her breakdowns. For example, if she's on a battlefield, she would break into tears, and bubble herself. And if the bubble breaks and someone attacks her, her powers will go all haywire, and shoot willy nilly.
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Re: Tsol Ekal (Almost Approved Fully)

Post by zerowing21 on Sun Apr 16, 2017 11:16 pm

Well, the fear of the beach is still very situational based and may not even come up that often, while the original one you had that nikkie made a suggestion on to fix it to be more viable is constant and can be triggered at any time. Do you see where i'm going with this? This might be something we need to talk about directly on the chatwing.
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Re: Tsol Ekal (Almost Approved Fully)

Post by zerowing21 on Sun Apr 16, 2017 11:56 pm

Ugg, I apologize, I mistype dosmething there ella. sorry about that. Thought, I can see her bubbling up and losing control applying via the orginal weakness you had if things get bad.
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Re: Tsol Ekal (Almost Approved Fully)

Post by zerowing21 on Mon Apr 17, 2017 8:56 pm

The history is fine for the most part, the main concern is the weakness, the fear the can be part of personality and the spells.
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Re: Tsol Ekal (Almost Approved Fully)

Post by zerowing21 on Thu Jun 08, 2017 2:40 pm

Could you please add another positive personality trait.
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Re: Tsol Ekal (Almost Approved Fully)

Post by trusttecna on Thu Jun 08, 2017 4:31 pm

Done
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Re: Tsol Ekal (Almost Approved Fully)

Post by zerowing21 on Thu Jun 08, 2017 5:17 pm

Everything to me checks out so I'll give her an approval. Now how about you have that jigglypuff put down that marker.
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Re: Tsol Ekal (Almost Approved Fully)

Post by trusttecna on Fri Jun 09, 2017 12:39 am

*Jigglypuff used headbutt on the stamp*

*Jigglypuff used headbutt on Tsol*

*but... it failed??*

Tsol: nope nope nope... *walks out*

(Thanks so much by the way!!)
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Re: Tsol Ekal (Almost Approved Fully)

Post by musasgal on Fri Jun 09, 2017 1:08 am

She usually belts out these feelings on paper. She writes entries about them, but she also writes songs.
So is she a self taught songwriter, or she just uses that as a tool to vent as well as releasing her feelings?

This water fairy rarely stands up to verbally offensive bullies. Mostly, she is compliant. Their insults do matter, though, and she takes them to heart. These feelings build up inside of her (she sometimes will release them a bit in song,) and at a breaking point of a height of sadness where it is hard for her to compress them down to handle herself normally, she will go into her Bubble of Anxiety, and stay until she deals with the problem, or until she pushes the problem away even more to get out of the bubble.

Does this also count for physical bullies as well?
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Re: Tsol Ekal (Almost Approved Fully)

Post by trusttecna on Fri Jun 09, 2017 2:24 am

musasgal wrote: So is she a self taught songwriter, or she just uses that as a tool to vent as well as releasing her feelings?

She just sort of vents them out with song.



The thing about the physical bullying is the same since usually a bully will be using verbal insults to back up their claims.
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Re: Tsol Ekal (Almost Approved Fully)

Post by musasgal on Fri Jun 09, 2017 2:38 am

She just sort of vents them out with song.
Then can you please add in that she uses songwriting as a tool? Cause either way, writing songs, is still songwriting (I should know. I know this tool quite well).

The thing about the physical bullying is the same since usually a bully will be using verbal insults to back up their claims.
Ah, that's fine.
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Re: Tsol Ekal (Almost Approved Fully)

Post by trusttecna on Fri Jun 09, 2017 2:47 am

Added in the second paragraph in personality ( i think. ) I never knew you wrote songs? Do you have a spare one I could see? I'd love to look at it. ^-^
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Re: Tsol Ekal (Almost Approved Fully)

Post by musasgal on Sat Jun 10, 2017 8:49 pm

one more thing. can you please reword writing songs to songwriting? it will match the personality
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Re: Tsol Ekal (Almost Approved Fully)

Post by trusttecna on Sun Jun 11, 2017 12:08 am

Done ^-^
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Re: Tsol Ekal (Almost Approved Fully)

Post by musasgal on Tue Jun 13, 2017 1:58 am

-uses the approve hammer-
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Re: Tsol Ekal (Almost Approved Fully)

Post by musasgal on Tue Jun 13, 2017 7:03 am

TEMP. NOTICE: TSOL CAN ENTER THE RP, BUT IS FORBIDDEN TO ENGAGE IN COMBAT TILL FULLY APPROVED!
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Re: Tsol Ekal (Almost Approved Fully)

Post by trusttecna on Tue Jun 13, 2017 11:10 am

I know. ^-^ The bubble is okay for now though, right?
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Re: Tsol Ekal (Almost Approved Fully)

Post by zerowing21 on Tue Jun 13, 2017 11:14 am

yes, the bubble is fine, since its not being used as a combat type thing.
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