Luciel Nerezza

zerowing21 wrote:Magic person type isn't needed since its for non student adult characters.

You did forget power type, so he's darkness/ice?

zerowing21 wrote:Mistakes happen, no biggie.

So his first year at Zaltora was cut short cuz of the bird and thus he never completed it?

zerowing21 wrote:well we have rules that characters have to start at the beginning with schools. Being kept back is acceptable and he could have started late for zaltora. But yeah, the schools are a mix of college and high school.

zerowing21 wrote:Also, could you add in a tiny bit more to what his life was like before he got his power in his history? Like how'd he get along with the sibs etc. Just for an extra bit of meat on the one and to get us what he's like back then. What was the reason he parted ways with his ex? That's something I'd like to hear in the history.

Hyfnae wrote:Cryo heal: Is he damage immune on the count of being encased in ice?

Draining tendrils: Reduce duration to 20 seconds to justify both the damage and healing components.

[i]Exploding shards:/[i] This is just a damage-only spell, needs no duration unless you want shards flying around for 2 rounds which is a bit rich in my opinion.

zerowing21 wrote:With the history being updated and giving some background to how he feels about his two sibs, everything is pretty much in order. *stamps approved on forehead*

Hyfnae wrote:Combat-Approved. Might I compliment the excellent format you have chosen for your spells!